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Hah hahah!

Lol! I right clicked and it said put this on front page. Anyway, it was a good photoshoped (if it was) picture but It was boring just watching a picture and some music. I left after the first 2 minutes. Still, it was okay.

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

:-P

Good for a first try.

I think this is good but it still needs work. I only recomend this but, shape tweens and sprites don't mix. I liked the mouths of the blocks. They moved very smoothly. I'm glad it wasn't one of those movies that had a helium voice but no background sounds. I also think you should work more on the storyline. So the blocks bascicly are angry at mario for always hiting them so they attack him. See that? You should stretch it out and fill that gap of empty space. On newgrounds, a good movie is something with background music, foley, good graphics(But it's okay for sprites) storyline, and hard work. I can't honestly say that you didn't work hard on this but I think it's safe to say that you have 2/4 of those things, not including graphics. I hoped this helped and I hope to see more of your movies in the future.

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prut97 responds:

Thank you! and very helpful.

this was awesome!

I loved the part where the sea monkey comes and bewitches the young ones! Excellent quality! Very serious story. But the part with the bike was a little random. Keep up the good work though! But you need better graphics! 9/10!

Heil responds:

lmao

wait, move a little to the left. No thats to far. Just go right under the chandelier. Perfect! Now stay right there while I pull this rope okay! *swoosh ker snap!* Sorry, I pulled the wrong rope. Wait let me fin- ow! How dropped the chandelier!

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